Shadow Knight

Ok, it's a great story so far, now i just need to find something i can fix. Hmm, can't find anything that can be fixed, needs to be read by ...

Great job, and i agree with hunter, i don't like poetry all that much, but this kept me reading until the end.

This poem applies to me, and it is kinda like that, except for the webcam part, she doesn't have one. Neither do i.

I see. Not too bad, this doesn't appeal to me though, lets see what everyone else thinks.

Good poem, regardless of what others say.

Actually, i love this peice, i mean, it's true. It's a fiction non-fiction. No character's needed, none used. I love how you called the god's arrogant, and how they were ...

*dances around like an idiot* You don't make friends with salad! Oh, sorry, was i supposed to be saying something? This joke is great, GREAT I TELLS YA!

Ok, we all like this poem right? Good, so all it needs now is better grammar. My story does, lots of stories do! So do lots of poems!

8) No probs. I am loving this story, i leave the major editing to Hunter and co.

Very good, and you are answering a lot of questions about the prince.

Didn't make sense to me, doesn't really matter. Nice poem anyways.

Um, will it be called Chapter 6?

Yep, post the rest, i want to read it! But seriously good story!

I agree Hunter. Most people think that poetry has to rhyme. Personaly my poems don't rhyme much. Not that i've noticed

I get the feeling it's Yurok, who is helping slay the orcs. I don't know, maybe he lead some of his fellow Elves to help the human's?